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Joe and Ellie amazing adventure(一)


七十二中7年级3班 EDENLEE
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         Joe and Ellie amazing adventure.(1)      
  Chapter 1        小荷作文网 www.zww.cn
       Here comes the prince and the princess.       小 荷 作文网 www.zww.cn
            Long ago  
 In the mystery universal. There is a peace,wonderful,wealthy planet called Wizard world. People in the wizard world all knows magic. But one wizard they fear the most is Kenn.    
In the palace, The King John is enjoying the tea. But was disturb by the angel jamie.    
 " Oh, my king, you got to come and see.' angel Jamie shout while running.     
  "See what?' Asked John.  
 " The new prince and princess.' Answered Jamie.  
  The King followed Jamie to room where the beautiful Queen. And the prince and princess lying on the side. He hold them high in the air.    "What shall we call them?'Asked the Queen.    
  "Joe and Ellie.' Answered by the King strongly.    
  Every wizard in the planet was happy about the prince and the princess. On the other side Kenn was not pleased to hear about it. He was angry and shocked by so many people loved the new prince and the princess.He wanted to enter the wizard world and kill the new born prince and the princess.  
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