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My Home


国声小学五年级 作文者2

  My sisther is listening to music.My brother is doing homework.My father is writing an e-mail.
  In the living room.You can see a TV and a sofa.In the My bedroom.You can see an air-conditioning,a computer desk,a bed,a wardrobe,a lamp and a conputer.I usuzlly play computer games.The wall is white.My sister is listening to music.My brother is doing homework.My father is writing an e-mail.In the study.You can see many books.My Grandpa is writing a letter.In the kitchen.Mom is cooking dinner.Grandma is washing the clothes.  
  This is my home.

 
 
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