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change in my hometown


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Dear Huang sir,  
 How are you going?Last week,I came back my hometown for the first time,which is named Dayi county.Great changes took place in my hometown. It took on a new look.   小荷作文网 www.zww.cn
 I saw taller building,more beautiful scenery and richer people.   小 荷 作文网 www.zww.cn
 The goverment of my hometown planted flowers and grass everywhere in order to make the land more beautiful. Of course,they took some ways to make river more clean.  
 My grandpa and my grandma moved to a new place where the goverment asked people to live in.There were many equipment,old men can spend some time on excise.It occured to me that my grandpa would be so happy.He always go for a walk with my grandma.  
 Grandpa's new neighbourhood was a lovely girl who was tall.But three years, she was short.My aunt, which lived with my grandpa,lived in a new happy life now.Although,he was poor.  
 My hometown let me so surprised.Oh,only when you visit my hometown will you know my feeling.  
 
 
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