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-你的微笑温暖了我的世界


宫舞若樱

  恍若隔世。喧闹的城市却是在眼前幻化成一片阳光普照的田野。橙色的田野。
   午后。万籁俱静。  
   阳光却出奇的灿烂。大片大片的金黄。耀人眼。   小荷作文网 www.zww.cn
   站在落地窗边,窗外是湛蓝的天。   小 荷 作文网 www.zww.cn
   还有安静而又喧嚣的城市。  
   车水马龙。却让我恍然想起了田野上那一片星空。  
   静谧。却又有一种热闹。千百颗星,缀在蓝黑色的天空。闪耀着。映着地面上的华灯璀璨。  
   回神。面前还是那大片大片的阳光和流动的人群。  
   恍若隔世。喧闹的城市却是在眼前幻化成一片阳光普照的田野。橙色的田野。  
   离离的草花,在风中招摇。一大片一大片的草。无边无际。迷人眼。一个戴向日葵帽子的橘色女孩,在田野中奔跑。阳光,暖洋洋的。万物,镀上了一层,淡淡的金色。  
   似是沉醉了吧。  
  似是沉醉了呢。  
   这样一片田野。  
   去哪里寻找?  
The afternoon. All sounds are still.  
Sunshine is amazingly bright. Big big golden yellow..  
Standing in the French window edge, the window is blue days.  
And quiet and noisy city.  
Pedestrians. But let me suddenly remembered the field that one the stars.  
Quiet. Yet there is a lively. Thousands of stars, compose in a blue-black the sky. Shine. Landing on the moon surface bright lights.  
During. Or that before of large areas of sunshine and flow of the population.  
Paid little attention; avoiding Mrs. The noisy city is in sight as a piece of storytelling sunny fields. Orange fields.  
The LiLi sucks, go in the wind. Large grass. Boundless. Charming eyes. A sunflower hat of orange girl, running in the field. Sunshine and warm. All things, plating a layer, light golden.  
Seems to be drunk now.  
Such a field.  
Where to go looking for?
 
 
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