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Bad day and great day


小河KF

  有错请指出、请原谅 First,I ate tasty breadfast.Next,I got a computer.Then,I had fun with friends.
  Yesterday was Sunday.I didn't go to school,too.I didn't wake up late.I woke up early.First,I ate tasty breadfast.Next,I got a computer.Then,I had fun with friends.Yesterday was really great.  
  Today is Monday.I had to go to school.But,I woke up late.Next,I forgot my bag.Then,I forgot my homework.My teacher was angry.Because I lated for school.It was eight o'clock.I lost my bag after school.My friends were helping.Oh,it was on the playground.Next,I lost my money.Then,I caught a cold.Today is really bad.

 
 
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