I got excellent scores on TOEFL (63/62/67, total: 640, May, 1998) and GRE (V: 700, Q: 800, A: 800, total: 2,300, Nov. 5th, 1998). My graduate GPA is 3.7. I sincerely hope you can consider my situation and review my application first.
Thanks a lot. Your kindness is greatly appreciated.
Yours truly，
Fang Lin
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Department of Chemical Engineering
Tsinghua University
Beijing 100084
China
Jan. 6, 1994
Office of Foreign Admission
University of Birmingham
P.O. Box 363
Birmingham B152TT
U.K.
Dear Sir:
I wish to pursue a doctoral degree in Chemical Engineering at your institution. My desired date of entrance is fall, 1994. Please send me necessary application forms at your early convenience.
If possible, I also wish to obtain a graduate assistantship so that I may support myself and obtain more practical experience while pursuing graduate study.
I obtained my B. E. (Chemical Engineering) in 1989 and M. S. (Chemical Engineering) in 1992 from Tsinghua University. At present, I work as a teacher at the same university.
I have taken the TOEFL and received a score of 607. I am going to take GRE this coming October.
Would you please send me the application forms for admission and financial support? Thank you very much.
Sincerely yours,
Henry Yu