He knew that since he did not help the poor little girl, he felt bad; and so that was the reason why he was cold. He was very sad; and when he was about to fly to Egypt, the prince said to the swallow, “I see that you are very sad these days; I wonder what is the matter, tell me?” the swallow did not speak, the prince forced the swallow to tell him; but he still didn’t say anything. At last the prince said, “If you don’t tell me I will put dynamites on your head and blow you up! I was trying to help you!”
At these words the swallow was so scared that he said out loud, “I heard the little girl say that that wasn’t enough to pay for his father, and so I didn’t tell you because I thought that you would not like it and…”
“Oh my dear swallow, why on earth would you think I will not help a little girl? And why on earth would you not tell me about this?” the spell was broken, the prince turned to real life, and jumped down from the statue’s stand, “Thank you dear swallow, you have broke the spell, and now I can live on land once more.
That was the end of the happy prince. During the lives when he was a golden statue, he realized how important everybody was to him, and that how important helping people is.
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Since the swallow had brought back the prince’s red gem, he could at last stay; but one night as soon as he was about to return to the Egypt, the happy prince said to the little swallow, “OH little swallow, please stay with me for one last night?” the swallow replied, “Oh dear prince, I couldn’t stay with you any longer, my friends are waiting for me and…” “Oh please little swallow, you must obey me;” the swallow sighed and said, “All right I shall stay with you for one last night.”