My Father,My Father范文

At first, my mother and I dared not climb for fear that it might collapse. But father climbed it everyday to prove its safety. The garret looked simple even shabby and the ladder seemed to decline soon. But later when I got used to it, I found it as solid as those made by professional carpenters.
I carried all my personal things onto that garret. My father and I pasted red papers on the wall and painted the ugly furniture red. So the garret became the first "room" that belonged to me.When I was about to move to my new house, I just didn`t want to leave. That garret was created with my father`s love and sweat and intelligence, beautified with my hand and filled with so many sweet memories of my family! That hard but sweet life time would live in my memory forever with father stands in the center of it.

简 评
一个贫寒的家庭。一个充满爱心又能干的父亲。一张父亲制作的简易木床。一个记忆中永远温馨的卧房。描写父爱可以从很多方面入手，可以写很多很多。应该说，这篇文章的语言并没有多少特殊之处。之所以感人至深，是因为这篇文章的选材：集中笔墨写父亲制作的简易木床。这就是突出中心的好处。一滴水可以折射出太阳的光辉；一张木床也可以反映伟大的父爱。父母之爱如三春朝晖无处不在，生活中的任何一点小事都足以将他们对儿女的爱表达得淋漓尽致。其实，想多写，又怎么写得尽?
(点评教师：汪中平)

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