小学生作文:记叙文阅读指导

My village


冲鹤小学五年一班 冯佩盈

  I like my village very much!
  This is my village. There are many Vegetable gardens in my village. Near the vegetable gardens, there is a long river. But the water is no clean .A path is next to the river. There are no tall buildings, but there are many tall houses and trees. The grass is green, the flowers are beautiful. There is much grass near the river. Children are very happy, they can run on the grass, play near the tree.  
  In my village ,the sky is blue, the air is fresh.   小荷作文网 www.zww.cn
  I like my village very much!

 
 
位置:发表区   年级:小学5 关键字,家乡
来源: 字数:387 投稿日期:2009-4-12 15:32:00 点击:
  樱之桃 点评

推荐3星:[樱之桃]2009-7-22 9:17:14
 网友打分:(综合分:)
 欢迎你投下宝贵一票(不能更改,入门级不能打分,选择收藏将进入我的珍藏)。
+2收藏 精品
+1还行 发表
-1真糟 退稿
   发表评论 
到百度搜索“Myvillage”