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My brother


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  Tomatoes are he favourite.They are sweet.
             My brother                
  This is my brother.He name is Li Zhi Fan.He is short and thin.He is very active and funny.He likes P.E.class and English class.He like play football.Tomatoes and apple pie are he favourite.They are sweet and tasty.He can sweep the floor and cook the meals.And he am abile to dress myseif. He often read books and watch TV.He likes about animals books.He is Young Pioneers.Egg and tofy for he lunch.Do you like he?

 
 
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